What are the advantages and disadvantages of income taxes?
The terminology of taxation has been existed along with human evolution. Taxation has been used as the form of collection of the government's revenue. So that, the government could be able to spend on various places for the improvement of public services. However, the ways earning the income are changing rapidly, whereas the taxation system is not developed accordingly.
The income tax is the main form of the government's revenue. The higher income earners would be paying higher income taxes and thus, the more revenue will be able to be collected by the government. The government collects a quarter of revenue from the income tax. This accumulation of tax is then used to provide a various services for the citizens comfortable living such as health, education, medicine, technology, research and development, finances, foreign affairs, and constructions. Therefore, the income tax is performing as a useful function providing the quality of lifestyles for citizens.
In contrast, the income tax does not actually work in the theoretical sense, because people from the higher income brackets do not pay the higher taxes. Since the society changes rapidly, the income sources have also changed and the number of ways to do tax evasions are increasing. However, because the current income tax system does not update with a trend, the lower income earners would have to bear the costs. Therefore, the actual income taxes would not effective and efficient compared to its theory.
In conclusion, the tax can become a main earning source for the government for the provision of various public services. Since the taxation cannot cope with the changing of earning methods, the income tax is not efficient.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'actually', 'also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286173633441 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.141479099678 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0868167202572 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578778135048 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0032154340836 0.0437548338989 7% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.11575562701 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0514469453376 0.0403226058552 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76350717401 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192926045016 0.0326793684256 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135048231511 0.0861772015684 157% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225080385852 0.021408717616 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1713.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 316.048096192 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22909090909 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.44 0.374742101984 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309090909091 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218181818182 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134545454545 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76350717401 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.037074148 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494545454545 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5583895925 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3333333333 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9580891546 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.814263465372 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 49.2424242424 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.2380952381 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393669428009 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152471950419 0.102741220458 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783337278013 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.661674221736 0.534860350844 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.084187916723 0.148594505496 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202012190601 0.134430193775 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508625401643 0.0742795772207 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.521292599868 0.324371583561 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0241304208806 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297029405597 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504003131503 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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