The line graph depicts the information about the news channel viewing per day during the year.
It is vividly seen that, initiating month of the year people visit news channel at peaked on 6 pm before decreasing after all year was fluctuating, whereas in January, at. 9:30 pm approximately 3 millions of masses watched news channel. While in may, increased dramatically the number of viewers near to 4 millions whereas after three month of the year declined significantly at 1 million. Additionally, last four months of the year was inclined viewer at 3 millions of the people.
Moving further, starting 4 months of the year, viewers did not watch news channel whilist in August, visiters surpassed all three time when people watch news channel and reached peaked point 4 millions while after that fall down over the last months. However, at 1pm viewers were watching just 1.5 millions
to news channel.
Overall, at 6 pm, masses watched news channels at peaked whereas least million of viewers at 1 pm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...s in January, at. 9:30 pm approximately 3 millions of masses watched news channel. While in m...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... near to 4 millions whereas after three month of the year declined significantly at 1...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
...nths of the year was inclined viewer at 3 millions of the people. Moving further, startin...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llions of the people. Moving further, starting 4 months of the year, viewers d...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... viewers were watching just 1.5 millions to news channel. Overall, at 6 pm, m...
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Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...d news channels at peaked whereas least million of viewers at 1 pm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, whereas, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03550295858 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62761871259 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7276553252 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207444157093 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127816289461 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12593084957 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180852504906 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156776210879 0.0819641961636 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.