The information about the three distinct spread such as margarine,low fat and reduced spreads and butter, which were consumed over 26 years period between 1981 to 2007.The data has been calibrated in grams.
To begin with, In 1981 butter was tops the list,it accounted for almost 140 grams. Subsequently,a slight increase was observed in ingest of butter and reached at all time highest 160 grams,until 1986. Nevertheless, In the next 20 years period,a considerably decline was seen and stood at 50 grams in 2007. Referring to margarine,a slight fall was manifested and recovered in a decade and touched at 100 grams. After that there was remain constant over the five years period and then dramatically decreased in utilize margarine spread,it comprised to 40 grams in 2007.
Moving further, the least amount of low and reduced spreads started consuming from 1996 and gradually increased within five years proportion, it accounted for approximately 85 grams between 1996 and 2001. However, there had been a minimal decline noticed and stood at 50 grams in 2007.
Overall, low fat and reduced spreads started absorbing from 1996 and remained all time high throughout the span.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24210526316 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73757075321 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4437652761 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160298160648 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654207782909 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053588728538 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110504424068 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464082310361 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.