This line graph depicts information about energy use in the USA over a period of 22 years.
The most popular energy industry in the USA is petrol and oil. There was a significant drop in the percentage of petrol and oil consumed between 1980 and 1985. Its figure dropped from 35 percent to 30 percent. The percentage of petrol and oil consumption began to soar after 1985, its figure rose from 30 percent to 40 percent in 2020, and its percentage is predicted to break 45 percent by 2030. Coal and natural gas consumption are roughly equal, both rising slowly by 2020, but by 2030, the proportion of coal consumption will exceed the proportion of natural gas consumption by 5 percent, with its percentage rising from 17 percent to 25 percent. The percentage of nuclear and solar/wind and hydropower consumption is the same in 1980 and their figure is about 3 percent. The proportion of nuclear energy consumed has risen slightly, and its share is expected to reach around 5 percent by 2030. The proportion of solar/wind energy consumed has barely budged, rising and falling slightly over a 22-year period and remaining roughly at 3 percent. The proportion of hydropower consumed has slightly declined by 1 percent by 2030.
- now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face it is a positive or a negative development 87
- International tourism is now more common than ever before Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not 89
- Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 78
- Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 899, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cted to reach around 5 percent by 2030. The proportion of solar/wind energy consume...
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Line 2, column 1049, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iod and remaining roughly at 3 percent. The proportion of hydropower consumed has s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85645933014 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72951305616 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464114832536 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5607377003 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133528754646 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619891043954 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025297931299 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106488415434 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100232651337 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.