the line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries and the pie chart shows the percentage of books by type that were borrowed over this time summarize the information by selecting and r
The line graph illustrates the number of books which were loaned out from four different libraries of villages over a month in the year 2014, while the pie chart depicts the ratio of borrowed books in term of genre at same time frame.
Overall, each library followed the varied pattern and fiction was the most demanded book over this time.
To begin with, Ryeslip and Sutton wood was in highest in number in the beginning, at 300 and 200 per month respectively, but throughout the time, Ryeslip decreased steadily and finished at roughly 175 per month at the end. Whereas, Sutton wood showed the erratic pattern, plummeted at 100 in august and afterward rose dramatically and reached to 300 at September, which is also the highest number among all libraries.
Whereas, west Eaton and church mount, they followed the same pattern, started from same level, at 50 per month in June and increased gradually and reached up to 150 per month at September.
Turning to pie chart, it shows that fiction was the most popular book in all four libraries, which covered just below 50% and it was followed by the biography, at 19%. Moreover, science and history were identical at 14% and self-help was the least demanded book among four libraries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: highest
...in with, Ryeslip and Sutton wood was in highest in number in the beginning, at 300 and 200 per mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91037735849 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43700902623 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570754716981 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1749114669 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.714285714 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300589452409 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154130043323 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143609905561 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187429788601 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159398113756 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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