The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart details the proportions of renewable energy in 6 different countries between 2010 and 2013. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that all the production of all countries increased dramatically except India saw a slight increase. Additionally, there was a significant increase in the proportion of Germany’s renewable power.
Looking first of all at the figure for France and Spain, in 2010 to the end of the time frame, the percentage of 2 countries’ production increased steadily from 13% to 15% and 14% to 16%, respectively. USA’ production saw a dramatic increase from 10% to 13% before drop 1% in 2012, followed by a steady increase of 1% at the end of the period.
Turning to the figure for India, while the production of this country saw a slight drop from 13% to 12% between 2010 and 2011 before increase 1% at the end of the timeframe, the figure for China dropped dramatically from nearly 15% to 13% before increase 4% at the end of the period. Additionally, there was a significant increase in the proportion of Germany’s renewable power from 18% to 25% and led the chart throughout the period.
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- The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90355329949 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00532479421 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467005076142 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0886022752 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126692522523 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785570314257 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717559769138 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102658588677 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04559916735 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.