Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility
to reduce the amount of packaging of goods, while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, most of people believe is that the duty of producers and retailers to limit the amount of packaging used on products whereas others argue thatconsumers should avoid purchasing products with a lot of packing. In my opinion, i agree with both views.
On one hand, the responsibility of manufacturers and supersmarkets to limit the amount of good’s packaging are really important. First off, it's crucial to stress that producers are well aware of how packaging affects the environment, including problems like waste pollution and climate change. The manufacturer also has a big responsibility because they can choose more environmentally friendly packaging materials, which helps the product be produced in a sustainable way. As a result, the environmental standards and costumers trust will continue to increase.
On the other hand, Each user of the product is also responsible in some way. Instead of purchasing goods in plastic packaging, they can choose products made of natural materials. Everyone needs to express their opinions and judge businesses or products that use an amount of plastic packaging, and as a result they can contribute and improve the quality of the environment.
In conclusion, althought there are those who argue that either customers or manufacturers should be more responsibility, i believe the responsibility of both are equal.
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- The line graph shows the percentage of renewable energy generation over total energy produced in 6 countries from 2010 to 2013 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can choose more environmentally friendly packaging materials, which helps the pro...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a sustainable way" with adverb for "sustainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ls, which helps the product be produced in a sustainable way. As a result, the environmental standar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, really, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46478873239 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25407998777 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0709542318 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276613937612 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106618748747 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740716911897 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165843958501 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586530693393 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.