The line graph shows radio and television audience throughout the day in 1992 in UK.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This line graph illustrates, comparison between radio listeners and television viewers above 4 years of age through the course of a whole day in 1992 in UK. Overall, it is clear that majority of population preferred to watch television.
To begin with, it is evident that after midnight slightly higher than 5% of the population watched TV while those listening to radio were below 5%. At around 2 o'clock the audiences of both TV and radio dropped down to the same level (2%). The same percentage of users continued till the dawn. Nevertheless, there was a significant rise in radio listening in the morning reaching a peak of 25% by 8 o'clock, whilst, television did not exceed its starting point till the dawn. However, there was a marked decline in the use of radio after 9 o'clock and it kept going down finishing the day at the same level it started. On the contrary, television viewers increased significantly in the noon surpassing radio listeners around 1 pm reaching a maximum level at night, almost half of the population used to watch TV by 9 pm. But this number decreased to 15% by an hour before midnight as majority of the population were off to their beds to finish the day.
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This line graph illustrates, comparison between radio listeners and television viewers
This line graph illustrates the comparisons between radio listeners and television viewers
it is clear that majority of population preferred to watch television.
it is clear that the majority of populations preferred to watch television.
as majority of the population were off to their beds
as a majority of populations were off to their beds
flaws:
Some contents wanted for TV from 6am to 13pm
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