The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of people who visited to the UK and from the UK to other nations from 1979 to 1999. There is also a bar graph demonstrating the most and the least visited country in 1999 by British people.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that, since the beginning of the mentioned time period a large number of UK residents traveled abroad as compared to visitors traveling to the UK. In the year 1999, France and Spain were comparatively more visited by Britisher’s than the USA and Greece. Turkey was the least visited nation by them.
On the one hand, it is clearly seen that around 12 million British citizens visited abroad in 1979 that later increased to 20 million. There was a dramatic rise in visits to abroad by UK people seen in 1999 reaching approximately 52 million in a gap of eighteen years from 1984. In the year 1979,10 million people visited the UK that slowly increased to about 29 million by the year 1999. It took a span of 20 years to observe this change.
On the other hand, the bar chart showed the most popular destination visited by the UK population were France and Spain reaching the number of 12 million and approximately 9 million respectively. Territories like USA, Greece, and Turkey had less than 5 million UK residents visiting them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... beginning of the mentioned time period a large number of UK residents traveled abroad as compare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67391304348 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66135616466 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6978839146 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375168336024 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155810353682 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10839057345 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265553863548 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128815300801 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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