You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates, how much percentage of the UK immigration and emigration happened in 2007 also stating the reasons for it.
Overall, it is clear from the given pie chart that, a significant increase was observed in people coming in the UK for definitive jobs and formal studies. However, a considerable rise was seen among people leaving the country for employment purposes. A decline was noted among people leaving the UK for educational studies.
On the one hand, for the UK immigration purposes a significant increase is noted regarding definite jobs (30%) and formal studies (26%). This is followed by, people who are accompany at (15%) and looking for other employment at (12%). Additionally, 17% individuals stated no reason or others for coming in the UK.
On the other hand, 51% persons were observed emigrating for employment purposes. This was followed by, 18% people who gave no reason for leaving the country. Moreover, 13% individuals left the nation as an accompanied person and 14% were under others category. However, it was noted that only 4% left the UK for formal studies to be received in other country than the UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...tudies 26%. This is followed by, people who are accompany at 15% and looking for other ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accompanied'.
Suggestion: accompanied
...6%. This is followed by, people who are accompany at 15% and looking for other employment...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...n accompanied person and 14% were under others category. However, it was noted that on...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98952879581 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78503521535 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9267882143 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14638568637 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668313093819 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401403187665 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108217504565 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274130991957 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.