The given line graph illustrates the information about the students who pursuing three kind of languages(French, German and Arabic) in Canada from 2010 to 2020. Units are measured in numbers.
Overall, firstly French remained static after that showed an upward trend while German appears an rapid decrease and Arabic display some downward fluctuation.
In 2010, French students are started with 5100 upto 2012 after that it rose dramatically upto 5500 students over a period of 8 year. On the other hand German students rapid fell from 5000 to 4700 students in one decade. Moreover Arabic undergraduate are fluctuated widely from 4550 to 4500 over a 10 year duration. Therefore French undergraduate reached a peak while Arabic have small difference but German fell down sharply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...n about the students who pursuing three kind of languagesFrench, German and Arabic i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ed an upward trend while German appears an rapid decrease and Arabic display some ...
^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...om 5000 to 4700 students in one decade. Moreover Arabic undergraduate are fluctuated wid...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...m 4550 to 4500 over a 10 year duration. Therefore French undergraduate reached a peak whi...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34677419355 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73456076558 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701612903226 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9581910468 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 5.23603664747 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160004062777 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679272700645 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089875690769 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109895611856 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948278115807 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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