Look at the figures for the proportion of people involved in agriculture,as shown in the pie chart
The pie chart compare the percentage of people working in cultivation between developing countries and the developed countries in three different year: 1950, 1990 and 2050.
Overall, the numbers of people working in agriculture sector wa high in developing countries as compared to developed countries and it is expected to follow the same pattern in 2050.
As it can be seen in the charts, in 1950, 81% of developing countries people engaged in agriculture while developed countries with lesser part of 37.7%. In 1990, the percentage of people working in agricultural sector was reduced in both developing and developed countries by nearly 20% and 30% respectively.
There is an expectation that proportion of people involved in agriculture will be decreased in developing countries with 37.7% and developed countries with 2% in the year 2050.
- The graph shows typical levels in enthusiasm confidence and ability of students attending a ten week IELTS course Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 80
- some countries have come to rely on tourism as their major source of income However many people believe that the problems caused by tourism are more serious than those it has solved Discuss both views and give examples 59
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 61
- Look at the figures for the proportion of people involved in agriculture as shown in the pie chart 79
- Nowadays, many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their course in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefit to individual students, it also brings a number of disadvantages.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32835820896 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02134678949 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 11.8253963993 43.030603864 27% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 142.8 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895133769869 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634181784568 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349936457965 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721454794157 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342441484384 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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