In many countries, people can now buy household goods today microwave,ricecooker and television more than ever, is ist a positive or negative development?
In these modern time,people from different nations can now purchase household equipment compared to the olden days. I believe that, this trend brings along a lot of benefits to human race.
To begin with,the use of electrical equipment at home now encourage multitasking. As may domestic work can be performed at the same time,Such as,programming the washing machine to be washing dirty clothes after loading it and at the same time, someone can be using the microwave to heat up food after setting the timer but these are not possible in the past. Because individual has to Carry out the task independently one after the other.Again,it saves time and energy used in performing these work separately.
Secondly,the purchasing of modern appliances at home these days by people also, help to build healthy relationships. Like the telephones in today's time bridge the gap of communication among people. Individuals do not need to travel long distance again before they can communicate and share their feelings with each other. This could be done with the use of video calls on phone in as much, the phone is internet connected . In addition, it prevent or reduce stress involved in taking up these tasks, for instance, soft copies of textbooks could be downloaded and be read on the phone any time at such person's leisure period. However, this is not possible in the olden days as people have to go around with the hard copies of these textbooks to read and this leads to fatigue.
In conclusion, the use of technology has influenced our life and what will buy as it makes like comfortable and many things could done simultaneously and I opined that this is a positive development to people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83226185154 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.833805475 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100724750041 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393613354152 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467601520878 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795316808482 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442443894499 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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