It is true that, in many countries today people live in small families or there is one person households. Living in larger families is becoming a rarity these days. In my opinion, this has a negative impact in many aspects.
Firstly, the traditional family support network is disappearing and this has a negative impact on children. Also, in larger families, members can do mutual sharing of each work. As a result, people can get some free time which can be utilised in some other work. Moreover, the nannies and babysitters are becoming common in every house but, babysitters may not give proper care to the children as compared to that given by their grandparents. In order to live in a short family younger generation is sending their parents to old age home instead of giving them love and care, they just leave them alone there, which is a greater loss to the family.
Next, lack of family support can make a person mentally sick . Huge number of people living alone suffers from psychological disorders which makes them moody, stressful and arrogant. Nowadays, people are becoming isolated which is leading to the rise in sedentary lifestyle. Also, a rise in juvenile delinquency can be seen today due to lack of love and support from the family. For example, everyday we can heard the news about different crimes committed by young adults. So, by living in larger families these can be reduced, as the older people will teach them about moral values and lessons of life.
To sum up, this trend of living alone or in shorter families must be stopped in order to save our younger generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... support can make a person mentally sick . Huge number of people living alone suff...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...he family. For example, everyday we can heard the news about different crimes committ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in short, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81884057971 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50399984993 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 106.607317073 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6540964179 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260923334025 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933117775573 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856040285747 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193463320712 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993423493833 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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