Many people are now spending more and more time traveling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits.
The given charts show the proportion of time working adults spend on different activities in a country in the years of 1958 and 2008.
Overall, it can be seen that people spent most of their time working, followed by sleeping. In addition, other interests such as playing sports or traveling to work were spent less time.
In 1958, the percentage of working (33%) was highest, whereas the proportions of sleeping and going out were slightly lower, accounting for 32% and 19% respectively. In contrast, 6% of the total rate belonged to other interests, but it was still higher than the percentage of travel to work, with 2%.
In 2008, the percentage of working increased dramatically by 42%, and it was still the highest in the chart. It is clear that the rate of sleeping witnessed a slight decrease of 25%, and the proportion of going out failed rapidly by 6%. However, there were slight increases in the percentages of playing sports and travel to work, which both made up 8% in the same year.
- Many people are now spending more and more time traveling to work or school Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits 78
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780 1860 and 2000 78
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a number of different places during your childhood years 78
- The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780 1860 and 2000 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ccounting for 32% and 19% respectively. In contrast, 6% of the total rate belonged...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...percentage of travel to work, with 2%. In 2008, the percentage of working increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, whereas, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62487692305 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4356719311 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.125 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13273408206 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622465895334 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398089537232 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869790527588 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039229138524 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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