Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
More and more people argue that socially destructive behaviours and disrespectful attitude to others have been recently on the rise. This essay will suggest that these developments are driven by the availability of violent content in social media and a worsening living conditions of the population, and then propose that possible solutions can be establishing new regulations and providing funding for social needs.
While social media sources are widely available all over the world, there are a few regulations in place to control the quality of information presented online. Furthermore, majority of social networks are free to use and extremely easy to register in, which attracts terroristic organisations that are keen to expand the influence. As a result, calls for social protests reach real people, slowly changing their values and views. Another reason that promotes anti-social behaviour and contributes to the lack of respect for government leaders is a recession that many countries are going through at the moment. Affecting living standards all over the world, a dare economic situation pushes people to the streets to complain and criticise responsible authorities. For instance, Ghana, the poorest country of Africa, has the highest rate of riots in the region.
One of the possible solutions for these problems can be a specific law, demanding media providers to block harmful content. To further address this issue, these companies can be obliged to report authors of the blocked information to authorities in power. To address the lack of respect, governments should arrange social subsidies, helping the poorest cohort of society. Not only this promotes better attitude towards people in power, this also gives individuals a sense of stability, reducing their stress and irritation and encouraging respectful behaviours. Indonesia is a prime example, where in 2020 after the announcement of $1000 subsidy to people in need, crime rate dropped by 20% in the same year.
In conclusion, by allocating additional funds for social support and strengthening social media regulations it is possible to address problems of socially harmful behaviours and absence of respect for others.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
... in social media and a worsening living conditions of the population, and then propose tha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'subsidy' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'subsidies'.
Suggestion: subsidies
...e in 2020 after the announcement of 000 subsidy to people in need, crime rate dropped b...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 340.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49705882353 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92269931404 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 283.868780488 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7720458778 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257111357039 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815109772852 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603166601297 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158061212431 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211685318986 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 40.7170731707 275% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
... in social media and a worsening living conditions of the population, and then propose tha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'subsidy' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'subsidies'.
Suggestion: subsidies
...e in 2020 after the announcement of 000 subsidy to people in need, crime rate dropped b...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 340.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49705882353 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92269931404 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 283.868780488 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7720458778 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257111357039 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815109772852 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603166601297 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158061212431 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211685318986 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 40.7170731707 275% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.