many people say that only way to created a good job is to complete a course of university education other claims that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work do you agree or disagree with the statement .
Gones of the days when masses indulge in work without going to university .However, it has undergone a sea .specially it globalization took place .Still ,there is a section of society ,which prefer to work without higher education. I extremely agree with the former statement the reason elucidated in upcoming segment.
First and the foremost reason 'why individual should get higher knowledge before involving in
work.Individual can never accumulate better job without getting professional education. To be more precise reputed vistas,appoint only well qualified individuals for their companies.A mechanic worker for instance to not know the advance knowledge as the engineer and engineer can do work with new technology and advance men going to his professional knowledge and higher education which is not only less time consuming but also more advance.thus the worker never performed as like engineer which get high salary or more promosion chances which make them to leave luxurious life hence higher qualifications make the career path more achievable .
However,after believe that indulge in work in early age which make them able to handle financial and economical situation when they are young hence they earn money they learn money management skills at the early age as they know need to invest her money to university education .Nevertheless ,if one spend hefty amount of education. it is beneficial for them as they get higher job in future ,which they can get more chance of promotion as well as they can spend luxurious life style ,where as navie always try to fulfill their basic needs.As they could not able to complete their luxurious lifestyle dream .therefore this is not a wastage of money .
To recapitulate ,i vehemently vouch that being a higher qualified person ,get more chance to spend life more comfortable and more chance for promosion yet navie could not ever complete their dream and never get high salary in the life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 314.0 196.424390244 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2101910828 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8123023968 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 106.607317073 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 283.868780488 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.917159401 43.030603864 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.714285714 112.824112599 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8571428571 22.9334400587 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7142857143 5.23603664747 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 1.69756097561 2415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10594156297 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601575007081 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306951823535 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575113710117 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498321529827 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.2329268293 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 61.2550243902 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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