The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map and graph below illustrate the global acceptness for eating insects and the ongoing prices for the available on the market. Overall, it can be seen from the first chart that Mexico has the highest level of willingness to eat insects, while Japan shows less readiness for insects products. Also, the prices for insects food are higher than other meats.
To begin with, the desire level of having an insect meal is fluctuated according to countries. Mexico comes first with %71. Followed by, Peru and Thailand with %58 and %56. While USA, Australia and Russia, they show less willingness to insects based products with %35, %34, and %32 sequentially. Comparing to Japan, only %21 of Japanese people prefer to have an insect product.
Regarding the second graph, per kilogram for insects is more expensive than other types of meat. For example, the price for weaver ant (wild) and bamboo Caterpillar (wild) are 10.65 and 10 usd dollar per kg. In contrast, beef is only for 3.03$ and one kg of buffalo is sold for 2.38$. Generally, the prices for insects products are 2.6$ for giant water bug (female, wild) , 3.67$ for field cricket( farmed & wild), and palm weevil (palm bred) is sell at 9.35$. Where the Rice (Thai hom mali) and Glutionus Rice are only for 0.78$ and 0.82$.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...o Caterpillar wild are 10.65 and 10 usd dollar per kg. In contrast, beef is only for 3...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$03'.
Suggestion: $03
...per kg. In contrast, beef is only for 3.03$ and one kg of buffalo is sold for 2.38$...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$38'.
Suggestion: $38
...03$ and one kg of buffalo is sold for 2.38$. Generally, the prices for insects prod...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$6'.
Suggestion: $6
..., the prices for insects products are 2.6$ for giant water bug female, wild , 3.67...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re 2.6$ for giant water bug female, wild , 3.67$ for field cricket farmed & wild, ...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$67'.
Suggestion: $67
...6$ for giant water bug female, wild , 3.67$ for field cricket farmed & wild, and pa...
^^^
Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
Suggestion: $35
... and palm weevil palm bred is sell at 9.35$. Where the Rice Thai hom mali and Gluti...
^^^
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$78'.
Suggestion: $78
... mali and Glutionus Rice are only for 0.78$ and 0.82$.
^^^
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$82'.
Suggestion: $82
...Glutionus Rice are only for 0.78$ and 0.82$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, regarding, second, so, while, for example, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78733031674 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25509270355 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6418911175 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3846153846 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364710306352 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124499734672 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108774705115 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243732004884 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139987040645 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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