The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The given maps illustrate how the waterfront area of a town called Darwin was transformed from 2009 to 2014.
Overall, it is clear that waterfront area had been greatly developed by the conservated of the industrial area into residential, recreational, and academic facilities. And another star feature is the appearance of harbour which improved the transportation of the area.
In 2009 majority of the town was industrial area which was then demolished to make room for a number of trees and buildings. In the North, the industrial area was destroyed to make new swimming pool, while there were no alterations to the school, convention centre, and two swimming pools. In the centre of the town the government have to built more with 3 residential buildings, next to the three previous ones. In addition, a university building was constructed to the west of the area.
With regard to access, in the seashore of the town, a harbour was constructed. There was also construction of a footpath which connected the newly constructed harbour with the main road in the West of the town. Meanwhile, the footpath which encircled the centre of the town witnessed no changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...vention centre, and two swimming pools. In the centre of the town the government h...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dings, next to the three previous ones. In addition, a university building was con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03608247423 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98362787314 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1353496849 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209476978546 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887470154482 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961119900823 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159252432021 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122126243952 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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