Given are the two maps depicting the disparity in physical outlooks of a local seafront area in Darwin through a 5 –year period, commencing from 2009.
Perceptibly, the core alterations happened mainly in the south of the region where it experienced a shift away from heavily serving the industry to educational purposes.
The region located by the sea seemed to experience some minor changes in the north where the industrial area which used to be located inside the ring of a footpath and adjacent to the lake was removed, instead, a new domestic swimming pool was established along with the consistent presence of the other two coastal pools over a phase of 5 years. Despite the sea zone depriving for erecting a brand new harbor located on the sea which was accessed by a new footpath running from the west, the fishing area in the northwest of the region were kept in order, staying stable after a changing period.
Regarding inland construction, both two industrial areas were removed to give green space for other facilities. The most striking feature appearing in the year 2014 was the erection of a new university in the west and the addition of another residential building in the middle of the area. Meanwhile, the south of the space was filled with full of trees planted at length, no change was observed with the conventional center and school in the north which were located near the lake.
- Task 2 In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight How far do you agree with either of these views 90
- When you face a difficult problem in life what do you feel is the best way to solve it asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem finding information about the problem using the Internet taking a long time to think about the problem 80
- The graph below shows the number of passengers using three railway networks from 1950 to 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Going green is a good choice or not 88
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 77
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