the map shows the changes in Pentland from 1980 to 2008. Summarise the information and make comparisons where possible.
The map below illustrates the reconstruction of Pentland and developments occurs between 1980 to 2008. An overall a huge construction during this period converted the unpopular area of the sea into an important colony.
As we see in 1980 it only consists of a road which leads toward sea and car park on north of road with grass land and on other side their was a small industrial area. However, the rest of the land on both side of the road covered by grass which made it unpupolated area.
But in 2008 a massive development and construction occurs changed into location with full of life and human activities. A new circular road around the sea built and yatch marina developed in ocean. On north side of road in upper block apartments and different kind of shops including money shops created, although on lower block a whole new housing society formed. On south of road in area next to sea had car parking, park and swimming pool while in lower half only cinema is constructed.
In new map car park is shifted toward south of road and was multi-storey and industrial area which was orignally located there removed. This location basically changed from factory area into housing coloney.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ties. A new circular road around the sea built and yatch marina developed in ocea...
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Suggestion:
...de of road in upper block apartments and different kind of shops including money ...
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Suggestion:
...parking, park and swimming pool while in lower half only cinema is constructed. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78743961353 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62826796209 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5661577566 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894491118079 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457634618154 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662048474694 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633509274967 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401826243547 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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