The maps below describe an area before and after the construction of a hydroelectric power plant.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate a region before and after the building of a hydroelectric power plant.
Overall, there are some new changes in the region with the appearance of the lake, transmission towers close to the power plant, and the hotel near the river. It is also noticeable that there was the disappearance of the national park, historic castle and agricultural land.
Before the plant construction, the region was quite simple. There was a river which separated the entire area into two zones. A bridge over the river was erected. In the north, there were vast stretches of forest on the left side and ranges of mountains on the right side of the river. To the south of the forest stood a national park and an ancient castle. To the east of the river, there is a land for agricultural purposes and a village.
After the plant construction, the region experienced massive changes. There is a hydroelectric dam in the middle of the river. There is also a lake in one part of the river which enables recreational activities such as boating and fishing. On the left side of the river, there is a cluster of transmission towers near the newly-erected power plant, which replaces the former park and castle. On the right side of the river, a hotel has been built to replace the previous farmland. The forest and mountains are left untouched, and so is the village.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73221757322 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73234892391 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460251046025 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.225136961 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.09268292683 367% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118797882284 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473244362862 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681424666574 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109818798904 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926022256815 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.