Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs.
Discuss both views and give your opinion? (TRI_HOMEWORK_05-06)
Till today, the women’s laws protect the women’s rights become popularly over the world. Because of this, a lot of changes in society ought to be necessary. The
refor some people believe that the justice between two different genders must be done even in police occupation or armed force. In contrast, another opinions claim that suitable jobs of women are out of this career.
On the one hand, some reasons may be gained by the opponents to support their thinks. At first, the divergent limitation of gender would be mentioned. These are often realized in the daily life such as the original power and mental capacity. According to this rationale, it is suitable that women play their role in clerical tasks or working at medical location instead of leadering a army to fight in the war. For further undersanding, the women’s physical body is not able to work under pressure in a long period as men. Beside cohesion of women will make unsuitable situation in the military force.
On the other hand, there are some reasons that men and women should be had equal treatments. For one thing, by today equality, in some research, it is found that if the similar sexual team (men with men) or pair would not work as effective as the team which has members who is in others gender. Because by letting women to participate in, they may do a support to other the teammate. Also women’s management is better than men.
In conclusion, I think that the ones who good at each career should be recognized and had a equal treatment even in the occupation advantages which always belong to men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7725631769 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50664770606 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3094420773 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261345631311 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840499439083 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546485572893 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133984045054 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502037721993 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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