The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

The maps depict the information about the development of the city called Frenton between 1990 to 2012.
Overall, it is most noticeable that Frenton had fewer trees and more buildings than 22 years ago.
It is vivid from map that the high street was still on same place after plenty of development. Moreover, in the east side of city the houses were modernaised into blocks of flats and on the top-left side of blocks of flats more flats were constructed in 2012. However, cafe and park was demolished and hotel and golf course were developed there in 2012. In contrast, on the south-east side of city the name of theatre was changed into cinema and the shops were renovated into supermarket in 2012.
Furthermore, in the north side of city playing fields with trees were converted into blocks of flats in 2012. Besides this, hospital was expanded and school and library remain same in 22 years time period whereas, bank was replaced into big restaurant. Lastly, the trees in the south-west side of the cities were chopped-down and technopark was established there in 2012.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
... and more buildings than 22 years ago. It is vivid from map that the high stree...
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...re renovated into supermarket in 2012. Furthermore, in the north side of city p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, so, still, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53209548821 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1451372811 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154690934471 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751391363147 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694882741557 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1151394599 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084906100425 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.