You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself.• Explain that you did not bu

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about my credit card statement. It has some purchases which are incurred by me.

I am gurjeet kaur. I am your preferred accountholder. Last year I received a credit card of Rs. 5 lakh. I am very satisfied with your services. I have not faced any problem While using it except this time.

Here, I would like to discuss about some flaws in my credit statement. Last Month I received my credit statement where I found some transaction which are not made by me. On 20thnovember I made a payment of headphones worth Rs. 5000 only but statement showed the payment of 50000 . Moreover, it showed a online payment of worth 20000 from xyz site which I did not made.

I discussed about the matter with customer care but I did not get the any reply from them. Please consider this matter and find out from where these amount was deducted. It is a huge amount from me.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
Gurjeet kaur

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our preferred accountholder. Last year I received a credit card of Rs. 5 lakh. I ...
^^
Line 6, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ut statement showed the payment of 50000 . Moreover, it showed a online payment of...
^^
Line 6, column 302, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... payment of 50000 . Moreover, it showed a online payment of worth 20000 from xyz ...
^
Line 6, column 364, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...rth 20000 from xyz site which I did not made. I discussed about the matter with c...
^^^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Gurjeet kaur
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61581920904 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49684183805 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2848830628 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.0625 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0625 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214731355646 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630253960869 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509698769243 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122950307833 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521320736469 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.33 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.