Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog Include in your letter Your reason for writing What you would like to happen

Dear Mr. Kapoor,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the troubles faced by me due to the ongoing barking from the dog in your house.

As you know, I am your nearby resident. I have a very hectic desk job. Even sometimes, I do official work from my house. Unfortunately, due to barking of your dog it is very difficult for me to concentrate on my work. Thus, it not affects my professional work but also impairs my health due to disturbance creates especially at night.

I would like to request if there is anything you can do to reduce the barking. For instance by changing it’s sitting position and finding the reason behind his over barking.

I am not writing the letter to disrespect and offend you. I am just wondering if you could help me in sorting this problem. As, we have a wonderful relation from long time.

Please let me know, if I can be your assistance in this matter and your swiftly cooperation will be appreciated .

Thanks,

Yours sincerely,

Gurjeet Kaur

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... for me to concentrate on my work. Thus, it not affects my professional work but ...
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...e the barking. For instance by changing it’s sitting position and finding the reason...
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... could help me in sorting this problem. As, we have a wonderful relation from long...
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...n from long time. Please let me know, if I can be your assistance in this matt...
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... swiftly cooperation will be appreciated . Thanks, Yours sincerely, Gurje...
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...nks, Yours sincerely, Gurjeet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, even so, for instance, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69832402235 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68224040314 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5466191104 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6923076923 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313177158136 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10302911007 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907812616506 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162533981987 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079907761801 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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