The two maps depicts a town known as Islip with its current appearance and its prospective development planned.
Overall, the town will have more places for transportation such as car park, bus station and expanded road in the long run. Meanwhile, school will be utterly collapsed and substituted.
It can be clearly seen from the town for now that the main road is quite limited with only two branches and they cannot be associated to each other. But, in the future, the dual carriageway is schemed to cover all of the facilities of the town center with pedestrian side linking between two entrances into the town and it is for people walking only. The park still remains the same play although it will be smaller-sized than it is.
The school is planned to completely be replaced by housing for the newer outlook. Moreover, there are two more place for accommodating people, with one is situated to the Northeast and the other stands west to the park. Shopping places standing north to the pedestrians will be divided into bus station, shopping center and car park. While, the opposite shops will not rearranged in development plan.
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 56
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 56
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 84
- The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...he dual carriageway is schemed to cover all of the facilities of the town center with pede...
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Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... station, shopping center and car park. While, the opposite shops will not rearranged...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rearrange'
Suggestion: rearrange
...ark. While, the opposite shops will not rearranged in development plan.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66005353163 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7990195961 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158767363259 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652662340728 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054898787062 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107537358261 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547486398978 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.