The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps elucidate how the center of Islip has at present time as well as after planned development.
Overall, Islip town center used to be housing shop now but it will be panned Islip town Centre has been converted into a plethora of facilities bus station Shopping Centre car park and mainly developed rand.
Initially, lislip town Centre is connected by the main road in the north countryside area and a couple of shops on both sides between the Main road. Moreover, in the center of town also southside houses are developed. In the Southwest side School with attaching Main Road pathway. furthermore, Southeast side Park is available.
Secondly, lislip town Centre will plant to develop in various facilities in the Northside such as bus station, shopping center and car park will be replaced the countryside area. Moreover, in North East side new house will be planed in the lislip town center one. The major edition being built with the pedestrian's pathway to a place of the main road majority of shops which present in Northside and surrounding town Centre dual carriageway will develop and also school and house will develop in Southside in the lislip town center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e housing shop now but it will be panned Islip town Centre has been converted int...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...chool with attaching Main Road pathway. furthermore, Southeast side Park is available. Sec...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pedestrians'' or 'pedestrian's'?
Suggestion: pedestrians'; pedestrian's
... The major edition being built with the pedestrians pathway to a place of the main road maj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92964824121 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5341783775 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527638190955 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5465832884 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167733948531 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07486524535 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516815172053 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118014697995 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365682689906 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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