The first map illustrates the centre of a Islip town in the present and the second maps indicates the planed development for this town in the future.
Overall, Islip town will experience considerable changes in the future plan. The most noticeable differences between two maps are there will be a lot of new places being built and the narrow main road will become the large dual carriageway.
As we can see from the map, the main road crossed the centre of the town will be turn to the way for pedestrians only. All the shops in the north of main road will be merged as shopping centre to make way for new bus station and car park being built. There will be also an area for new housing in the northeast of the town.
Turning to the south of the town, not alike the shops in the north, these here will be remained unchanged, and so do the school and housing zone. There will be two areas for housing, one in the southwest, one in the south east, near the park. The park will be significantly narrowed, but still stay at the same venue as in the present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34848484848 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30743973592 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4104645612 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152762485783 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803130931137 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599710853304 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117088168728 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653807735374 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.