As we can see from the scheme above, we have two representations from the centre of Islip city. Firstly, are represented the structures that can be found in the town at the present moment. While in the second picture is possible to observe the plan for future implementations.
First of all, the current map reveals that the town is near to the countryside, have several shops, a school, houses and a park to the south. The main road go through the centre between the shops.
Generally, some buildings are going to remain after the improvements, specially on the south, as the school, houses, some of the shops and also the park, although the latter will be reduced in size.
Regarding the accessibility, roads will be larger, with two lanes and a huge roundabout will be created surrounding the city centre, because the main road that exists today, will cease to exist. No cars will be allowed in the centre so people can walk freely.
Some new structures will by added as the Bus station in Northwest of town, on its right will be constructed a new shopping centre with place to park the costumers automobiles. To the north-east new houses are planned to be made, just north to the park. On the south less changes are going to be made, as previously mentioned, with exception of the road and also the new habitation area that also will be improved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ly on the south, as the school, houses, some of the shops and also the park, although the l...
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Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun changes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e, just north to the park. On the south less changes are going to be made, as previo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, regarding, second, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70292887029 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68369518558 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9266203587 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880167306619 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041544389472 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279422287941 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523824370897 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365661524718 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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