The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps illustrate the road access of the Islip town centre before and after renovation.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that a lot of shops will come into centre after rebuild. Also, there are significant changes to the road.
Now, an entrance is entered to the school and shops for citizens along both sides of main road, park is on the other side, to surround housing. shops are placed on both sides along main road respectively. The top of town centre is countryside.
In the new planning, the road will be changed to ring type, vehicle may come in the centre through dual carriageway and a pedestrians only area would be built instead of main road, bus station, shopping center and car park will add to replace top side of shops, a new housing would built next to car park. Furthermore, the entrance to enter school will be instead by ring road due to connect with park, which is next to one new building to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re are significant changes to the road. Now, an entrance is entered to the schoo...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Shops
...on the other side, to surround housing. shops are placed on both sides along main roa...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a pedestrian' or simply 'pedestrians'?
Suggestion: a pedestrian; pedestrians
...the centre through dual carriageway and a pedestrians only area would be built instead of mai...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
... top side of shops, a new housing would built next to car park. Furthermore, the entr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53571428571 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36539560579 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7089679032 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979455591093 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062188401541 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750648508646 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860562518456 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732738170526 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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