The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
<p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Verdana, "Lucida Grande", "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">The maps illustrate the current and predicted future Islip town centre.</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Verdana, "Lucida Grande", "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Overall, it is clear from the maps that some pedestrianisation is planned for shopping and housing area, while a new road for vehicles is planned <a id="tippy_1_link" class="tippy_link" title="to frame this area" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); border-bottom: 1px dotted; cursor: pointer;">to frame this area</a>.</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Verdana, "Lucida Grande", "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Focusing on the current map, the town center is developed around a main road, which stretches from the west to the east. There are many shops to the north and to the south of the road. Whilst it <a id="tippy_2_link" class="tippy_link" title="is mainly consisted" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); border-bottom: 1px dotted; cursor: pointer;">is mainly consisted</a> of the countryside in the north, a big area is occupied by housing in the south. This area is limited by a park in the east and a school in the south-west. Both of these structures are connected to the main road by side roads.</p><p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Verdana, "Lucida Grande", "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 12px; white-space: normal;">Moving on to the predictions, a circular road that goes around the city center attracts attention. This road expected to be built is a dual carriageway. The middle part of the main road is projected to be pedestrianised. Although the southern part of Islip is not <a id="tippy_3_link" class="tippy_link" title="designated" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); border-bottom: 1px dotted; cursor: pointer;">designated</a> to see big changes other than some new housing and a <a id="tippy_4_link" class="tippy_link" title="shrink" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); border-bottom: 1px dotted; cursor: pointer;">shrink</a> in the size of the park, there are many changes planned for the northern part. Shops in this part will be demolished and a shopping centre and a housing area will be introduced. A bus station and a parking area are also planned to be built to the west and the east of the shopping centre, respectively.</p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
... new road for vehicles is planned ^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the south of the road. Whilst it ^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...the southern part of Islip is not ^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...other than some new housing and a ^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 965.302439024 251% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 349.0 196.424390244 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.93982808023 4.92477711251 141% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.06075647299 2.65546596893 228% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429799426934 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 283.868780488 226% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 307.918966613 43.030603864 716% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.2 112.824112599 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.9 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455215699036 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0149030301484 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022086298839 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455215699036 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.2329268293 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.56 11.4140731707 206% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 76.0 11.4329268293 665% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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