The maps illustrate the development that has taken place in a city from 1950 to the present day.
In general, the most significant modification after decades is the renovation of the city's infrastructure, population, and economic area. It can be easily seen that there are also various newly built structures between 1950 and the current time.
Firstly, the whole city has experienced a growth in population density of 200,000 citizens. Besides, it is interesting to note that the enlargement of the business district and areas for citizen accommodation has been dramatic. Also, there has been a considerable southward expansion of the airport in the southeastern part of the city.
In addition, a reservoir stretching from west to east of the city has been created in the location of the river. Another major change is that the lately constructed thoroughfare running west-northeast on the other side of the river has intersected the existing one near the place where the bridge is currently set up. Additionally, there did not use to be a dam near the airport in 1950, but it has been established in the eastern part of the city after years. Another notable development has been the opening of a government building in the new residential area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...tly set up. Additionally, there did not use to be a dam near the airport in 1950, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07655502392 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07013774082 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5736089496 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14612029013 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617018923478 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834918070948 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116592864996 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10217612632 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.