The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps below show the village of Stokeford in the years 1930 and 2010. The map of 2010 illustrates the changes incorporated in the village over a period of 80 years.
In the year 1930, the hamlet Stokeford was mostly covered by farmland. As revealed by the map, it had a couple of shops acoompanied by a post office which was just located beside the main road. There were very few residential houses in the village and all of them were located adjacent to each other on both the sides of the main road. The Primary school was big but had only one building. The hamlet had a large garden full of trees and a large house was situated in the middle of it.
The village underwent significant modifications in the next 80 years.As shown by the map in 2010, the farmlands are completely removed from the village. The shops were removed. In its place, a lot of residential places have come up. The Primary school was modernised and made bigger. The map reports that lot of side roads are added that are surrounded by houses on both sides. The size of the garden has reduced considerably while the erstwhile large house is replaced by a larger Retirement home.
So, the village of Strokeford has seen a lot of changes since 1930 but the bridge over the river still stands unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cant modifications in the next 80 years.As shown by the map in 2010, the farmlands...
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...ed and made bigger. The map reports that lot of side roads are added that are sur...
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...are surrounded by houses on both sides. The size of the garden has reduced consider...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55844155844 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4843205014 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549783549784 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.33902439024 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5881658129 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2142857143 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204180573013 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076133006492 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113589265491 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145808986221 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113914997497 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.