The maps : the plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.
The maps illustrate the alterations of the sport centre of the university in present and in the future. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the replacement of the outdoor courts’ area.
To begin with the west part of the sport centre, the existence of a new leisure pool, a new changing room and sports’ shop has replaced the position of the west outdoor courts. In contrast, the middle part of the sport centre remain unchanged in future plans, nevertheless, the size of the gym will be extended into a larger size and it will connect to the east side of the building.
In accordance with the other modifications, Present to future witness the development of changing room and new café which were located in the opposite of new sport hall. Moreover, there will be two new dance studios that will be constructed where it was specifically beside the gym’s entrance.
- some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. 73
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. 78
- Map : the changes of various facilities in the city between 2007 and 2010. 67
- The map shows the change of museum from 1957 to 2007. 73
- The maps : the plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91082802548 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82945966962 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9010987142 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18100950751 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971005811396 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065907105673 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127047607858 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323234813164 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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