The plan below shows the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.
The first map illustrates the present layout of a university sports centre and the second map demonstrates the future plan of a university sports centre. Overall, after redevelopment sports centre will be entirely changed rather than present now while the infrastructure and facilities of sports place will be also developed.
According to the present map, The outdoor court is situated west and east of the sports centre and the swimming pool was located center of the club which is 25m long. Furthermore, changing room, gym, seating area and reception have been around of the swimming area where were standed in front of the entrance door.
However, Turn to the future plan, There will be newly added various amenities to the sports centre. The outdoor court of the east in the present plan is going to be a sports hall while another one was dislodged and It will have converted the leisure pool. There is a two dancing stadium is going to be reconstructed east of the building. In additionally, It had been afresh built sport shop and cafe for the refreshment in the two sides of the entrance door in the renewal plan also the gym area will be increased in a size.
To recapitulate, The future plane has plenty of amenities for the sportspeople.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83720930233 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71686836551 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0353961203 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237627479275 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966234720286 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887735959146 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128308776159 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126379798663 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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