there are many Festival in a years. one of them is for children. it is Mid-Autumn. it is celebrated in many country such as: Vietnam, Korea , China,... it is last for a day on 15 of lunar August. in this festival we can see many events. the moon is full in this day, many lanterns are decorated on the street. flowers are on sale every where. we can see the moon cake very easily because it is sold at every corner of the street. many schools for kids are beautiful and colorful with many lanterns,.... having many activities in this festival. people buy many flowers to show. many families have kids to make moon cake and some different cakes to teach their children about tradition festival. it is festival for children so they have so many activities. they have many funs with their family. they are eaten so many cake, they are played with lanterns , they are listened about this festival,,....
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
there are many Festival in a years. one of th...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Festival seems to be countable; consider using: 'many festivals'.
Suggestion: many festivals
there are many Festival in a years. one of them is for children...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'festivals'?
Suggestion: Festivals
there are many Festival in a years. one of them is for children...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
there are many Festival in a years. one of them is for children. it is Mid...
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there are many Festival in a years. one of them is for children. it is Mid-Autu...
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...n a years. one of them is for children. it is Mid-Autumn. it is celebrated in many...
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...them is for children. it is Mid-Autumn. it is celebrated in many country such as: ...
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Suggestion: ,
... in many country such as: Vietnam, Korea , China,... it is last for a day on 15 of...
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... country such as: Vietnam, Korea , China,... it is last for a day on 15 of lunar A...
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...s last for a day on 15 of lunar August. in this festival we can see many events. t...
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...n this festival we can see many events. the moon is full in this day, many lanterns...
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Suggestion: Flowers
...y lanterns are decorated on the street. flowers are on sale every where. we can see the...
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Suggestion: everywhere
...ated on the street. flowers are on sale every where. we can see the moon cake very easily b...
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...treet. flowers are on sale every where. we can see the moon cake very easily becau...
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Suggestion: Many
... is sold at every corner of the street. many schools for kids are beautiful and colo...
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Suggestion: , .
...eautiful and colorful with many lanterns,.... having many activities in this festi...
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Suggestion: People
...aving many activities in this festival. people buy many flowers to show. many families...
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Suggestion: Many
...tival. people buy many flowers to show. many families have kids to make moon cake an...
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...heir children about tradition festival. it is festival for children so they have s...
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...ildren so they have so many activities. they have many funs with their family. they ...
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Suggestion: They
... they have many funs with their family. they are eaten so many cake, they are played...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cake seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much cake', 'a good deal of cake'.
Suggestion: much cake; a good deal of cake
...ns with their family. they are eaten so many cake, they are played with lanterns , they a...
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Suggestion: ,
...many cake, they are played with lanterns , they are listened about this festival,,...
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Suggestion: ,
... , they are listened about this festival,,....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.487652522 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8033692877 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.0 112.824112599 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0625 22.9334400587 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0518223450438 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.242061459138 0.0843802449381 287% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518223450438 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.2329268293 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.75 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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