Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past
Being a parent means that you've risen to a new stage and huge responsibilities. Ways of parenting differentiate from a person to another, they either do it the old ways or the new ways but mostly there are things that limit their abilities and time.
These days modern lifestyles mostly take over parenting and affect it badly by parents not having much time to be with their children, and that leads to many other things. Both parents would be working at almost the same time and that results in not having enough time to stay and do the usual activities parents do with their children. For example, parents wouldn't be around their children so children would have to stay alone and that could result in them to be lazy or even have depression.
On the other hand the old ways of parenting, most parents used to have much more time than these days.
They would be around their children and eat breakfast, lunch, and dinner together with them. Usually, on weekends they would go out together to have a meal and do activities together, like swimming, playing soccer, and even simple games like tag.
Moreover, I think that parents should always be with their children and organize their time. Because not staying that much with their children will make the children suffer and affect them physically and mentally. And parents should do their best to be with their children no matter what the situation is. Because in the end, they would regret not staying much with them as they're the most amazing thing in the world.
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 76
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ld regret not staying much with them as theyre the most amazing thing in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30842986397 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515037593985 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5633728937 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47733512677 0.215688989381 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202243418397 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102336904471 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245539031586 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129930569098 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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