In today's world, as a result of improving technology, boundaries between countries are not that much important. Technology has enabled people to communicate easier and of course faster. Nowadays people can share their ideas and interests. Moreover, they acquaint with foreign peoples and learn about their history and lifestyle. The information on the Internet is hugely impacting people's worldviews and leads their thinking process. Since the usage of modern technology is global, it is moving people toward a common culture.
Modern technology has broken national boundaries and brings people around the world closer together. Today with the usage of online Apps like Facebook, Instagram and Tweeter people can make friends with people from other countries, and physical distance is no longer an issue. Individuals can exchange their ideas and feelings via These Apps. Especially the young generation is completely overwhelmed by the modern technology, they are constantly sharing photos and videos of their life. Therefore people are getting more close.
The internet has enabled us to have all sorts of information and news from all over the world. Moreover, this information shape people's mind and on some level instruct them. As people are influenced by the same source, the gaps between them are gradually disappearing. and this whole process is actually spreading a common culture around the world.
These days the use of Technology is ever increasing, undoubtedly its impacts does not sum up in just facilitating our lives. According to the above explanations, it is impacting other aspects of our life too, like social and psychological. Hence the global usage of it, it is creating a single world culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: And
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37777777778 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77373533016 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5639660153 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125598471708 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451503781311 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673510357571 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791756044395 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304436089577 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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