Internet has become the need of todays world. A big quantity of human beings are either connected with the internet directly or indirectly. Depending on the age and nature of the person using internet, the purpose of the internet changes. Just like all the inventions internet also has some disadvantages for example privacy breach by the hackers and big companies for their advantages. So the question arises Do the advantages of the internet outweighs the disadvantages of the internet?
Nowadays the consumption of internet is increased rapidly because of the recent technological inventions and some world wide spread diseases such as COVID 19 which basically put down the whole world into lockdown situation. People were stuck in their houses and cant complete the tasks such as shopping, bill payments etc which they used to do physically. Also since most of the people had no work they need some kind of entertainment. At this time internet grabbed the opportunity and provided a way to accomplish the tasks by providing online billing and shopping facilities as well as internet the has so much content available on it which each individual can use and entertain themselves. A nerdy person can read the books and watch the videos of their fields at the same time a sports fan can pick the sports related stuff from the internet. Internet has something for all age and kind of people, so even the children can use the internet for their studies as well as for entertainment. Internet not only provided the above facilities but also help in controlling the spread of COVID 19 by restricting the physical contact of the people.
Apart from the facilities and entertainment, internet also played a very important role in keeping the world economy stable. The work from home is possible only with the help of the internet. Many IT companies make it mandatory to work from home and stricktly asked employees not to enter the office and by doing it they basically cut out the contact of millions of their employees with each other. Not only it helped in controlling the spread of COVID 19 but also the lives of these millions of employees and their family was saved by this and all it possible just because of the internet availiblity at their homes.
If we count the disadvantages of the internet, we can say that they are pretty much limited and we can even avoid few by just being little smart. We can avoid the use of unsafe websites and content also we can add few security restrictions and antiviruses to our devices to keep the unwanted content and users away from our devices. Big companies like Google, Youtube, Facebook Amazon etc are regularly working on the security of their sites while government also making the applying the strict policies for the companies which trying to steal our personal data. Cyber police also present in almost all the countries which provide the assistant in response to the frauds.
Finally, we can conclude that even though there are some disadvantages associated with the internet but we can not ignore the advantages of internet. Internet is the future and its making our life more easy.
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 61
- Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 56
- More and more people ore using the internet to do their tasks rather then doing in person e g bonking shopping hotel booking etc Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inventions'' or 'invention's'?
Suggestion: inventions'; invention's
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... People were stuck in their houses and cant complete the tasks such as shopping, bi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he assistant in response to the frauds. Finally, we can conclude that even thoug...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and its making our life more easy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, while, apart from, as for, for example, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 6.8 338% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 33.7804878049 198% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2617.0 965.302439024 271% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 533.0 196.424390244 271% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90994371482 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 3.73543355544 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67267620229 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 106.607317073 232% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 283.868780488 290% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 8.94146341463 246% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6795077981 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.954545455 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2272727273 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224849451814 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728032407983 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678077745109 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131935370103 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572698801717 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 40.7170731707 287% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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