The most popular countries visited by tourist from the United Kingdom and China in 2018.

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The most popular countries visited by tourist from the United Kingdom and China in 2018.

The bar graph illustrates information about most popular countries visited by tourist from the United Kingdom and China in 2018. Overall, there were five countries are preferred by these tourist that are reported in percentage.

The most popular countries that are recorded the highest rate liked to visit was by the united states at 45% China tourist. In contrast, the lowest number of countries that were being chosen countries to visit is the United States by the United Kingdom tourist and turkey and France by china tourist at 10%. it can be observed that the amount of countries preferred Greece by China tourist and Spain by the united kingdom tourist is same at 20%. there were two countries that the United Kingdom liked more than China tourist which are Turkey with the difference at 15% and Greece with the difference at 10%. However, China tourist favoured visiting to the United States more than the United Kingdom tourist with the difference at 35%. it is noted that the United Kingdom tourist show preference less than tourists from China by the United States with the difference at 35%. there were two countries that China tourist favoured less than tourists from the United Kingdom namely Spain and France with the difference at 5%.

In conclusion, the United Kingdom tourist chosen visiting to many countries more than China tourist where as only liked visit to the United States.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02136752137 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30086438448 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.354700854701 0.547539520022 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8268183664 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.617107449 0.215688989381 286% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.354186967727 0.103423049105 342% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149534402542 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.509084441571 0.15604864568 326% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738434762414 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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