Life become more easier if we can prepare our own meal. In my opinion I agree to this notion that self cooking is the best way to save time, money and stay hygienic.
As we all know in this fast moving world we have very less time to go at restaurant and eat during our office hours. To solve this problem we can learn how to cook food using online tutorial. We can prepare our own meal everyday. There are many youtube channel shows for example, khana khajan, meals on wheel, food network chefs etc, where you can learn variety of food. There is no need to join any cooking tutors to learn how to cook. We can prepare that at free of cost.
Cooking food become so easier that now women can learn online and open their own restaurants. For example, in Delhi many women open there own cooking shops. They supply lunch box food to the student and bachelors. This them independent in this growing world. Children can also learn and feed themselves as they are very use to internet. There are ready-made food available in the market which require very less time to cook. Some people also cook fancy recipes at home rather than going to expansive restaurant.
Baking is so easy now even fitness freak people can learn online and cook their own food at home. However, technology and gadgets also play a vital role. For example, microwave, pan, electronic chapati maker, fridge etc.. are very useful to make it easier.
To recapitulate the aforementioned notion, I would like to suggest taking online videos, watching TV food shows, using electronic gadgets,really help the people life. Yes, food has become effortless to prepare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
Life become more easier if we can prepare our own meal. In my o...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e tutorial. We can prepare our own meal everyday. There are many youtube channel shows f...
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Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'channels'?
Suggestion: channels
...n meal everyday. There are many youtube channel shows for example, khana khajan, meals...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...youtube channel shows for example, khana khajan, meals on wheel, food network che...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
.... For example, in Delhi many women open there own cooking shops. They supply lunch box fo...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...an, electronic chapati maker, fridge etc.. are very useful to make it easier. To ...
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Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
... electronic chapati maker, fridge etc.. are very useful to make it easier. To reca...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , really
... TV food shows, using electronic gadgets,really help the people life. Yes, food has bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31729301908 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2589842893 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9047619048 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.619047619 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160644327438 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570892850672 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527344249601 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108420020302 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333465132751 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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