Dear Manager,
I am writing with regard to the farewell party which you asked me to arrange for Mr Rickie.
After consulting with the entire colleagues, it seems that 21 June will be the convenient date for majority of the employees. According to the schedule, party will start by evening 5 until 11 in the night.
I have sent a survey poll to people requesting for the recommendation of places and in that TajCoronel seems to be the best option, considering the safety factors. It is with in the city limits and merely 2 kilometers from our office and hence we can expect our entire women staffs to attend the party.
As per the count 20% of the employees prefers to consume vegetarian food and remaining all are non-vegetarians and accordingly the request was submitted to the restaurant successfully. In addition, dance floor with a live DJ has been provided as a complementary service from the hotel side. As we have just 2 weeks left, venue authorities requested to confirm the booking on or before 15 June in order to make the necessary arrangements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John Abhrae
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am writing with regard to the farewell...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you asked me to arrange for Mr Rickie. After consulting with the entire colleag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, look, so, well, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90337952417 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4519757228 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146072433348 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054222389444 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550462421798 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072956663253 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602309385635 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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