In the recent years, an enormous amount of people are migrating from the countryside to cities, which is often becoming a trend. Despite various legitimate reasons, undoubtedly the increasing population in urban areas leads to myriads of problems. This essay will discuss some of the vital issues of migrating into cities and propose key solutions to tackle these problems.
The predominant problems are local jobs such as farming and artistic work will descent gradually in the countryside, due to the higher migration of people onto cities. Another factor is that over-population of individuals in the metropolitan areas is directly proportional to the increment of their vehicles which causes a humongous amount of pollution and acts as one of the contributing factors of global warming. For instance, a survey conducted by Bangalore board of environment claims that 20% of the people in Bangalore are living in unhealthy lifestyle, which in turn acts as a life threat in the form of diseases such as malaria and dengue.
One of the solutions is people should consider and value the local job, which sequentially simulate the next generation to pursue. Companies should consider expanding their business on the outskirts of the city will result in a numerous number of people to reside over there. Additionally, healthy living and pollution less environment will be exorbitantly high in those places; thus, lead to a high standard of living. Eventually, they can also take care of their older parents at their home.
In conclusion, relocating from the countryside to cities is advantageous in one way rather the problems caused are exorbitantly high. In my opinion, people should wisely think before migrating from their native lands as it not only affects them, but also their future generations.
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- One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job your manager has asked you to arrange a leaving party for him Write a letter to your manager and Suggest a suitable day and time for the party Recommend a place Discuss about the food and entertainment optio 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26297577855 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92455715727 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2078636886 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177266279668 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605458313152 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410156592845 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10443623705 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256712664226 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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