The percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educatiobal setting in the uk in 2010

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The percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educatiobal setting in the uk in 2010

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women teacher in six diverge kinds of educational sector in the UK in 2010. It can be seen that enormous percentage of woman teachers teach in nursery/pre school and the highest percentage of men teachers offer lesson in University. Whereas minimal percentage of women bestow courses in university and for man was become teacher in nursery or pre school. Both is opposite, ite is measured in percentage

Regarding to the data, the substantial percentage women teachers for 90 % educated in Nursery or pre school, attend after that for 85 % teach in primary school. Two of those are top of two considerable education sector in the UK in 2010. The three hugest teachers percentage in education area taken by 70 %, they as a lecture in university. And the minor percentage men teach in the nursery or pre school about 2 %. Followed by 3% of all male in the UK work as teacher in primary school.

In the other hand those were similarity on behalf to women and men percentage who raise in the college, which was 45 % of the population. Exactly to obtain career in university. The men percentage is higher than women percentage have quarrel 45 %. For two others, the junior high school and private training institute have dissent. For teacher women percentage in the junior high school more advanced than the men. And the proportion of female who be division for teaching in private institute more slighty instead of male. But the diversification is very slight, only 10 %

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2019-06-18 Brian Sahar 73 view

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...e are top of two considerable education sector in the UK in 2010. The three hugest tea...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...tor in the UK in 2010. The three hugest teachers percentage in education area taken by 7...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'quarreled', 'quarrelled'.
Suggestion: quarreled; quarrelled
...ge is higher than women percentage have quarrel 45 %. For two others, the junior high s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88372093023 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78871754257 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507751937984 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2445243804 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 5.23603664747 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240027370535 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914616368012 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068323335214 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180991805635 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539826532631 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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