The picture below shows how a hot balloon works

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The picture below shows how a hot balloon works.

The diagram illustrates different parts in the structure of a hot air balloon and its operation.

Overall, there consist of four major components to form a hot air balloon, namely the envelope, the skirt, the burners and the basket. It is also clear that the balloon is supplied with hot air in order to make it fly.

In terms of the construction, the balloon, which is one of the main parts, is called an envelope made of different layers of gores and panels. While there is a parachute valve at the top functioning as a self-sealing flap, a skirt is attached to the bottom of the balloon which is connected to the basket with strong ropes. The basket provides seats for passengers and enough space for two propane cylinders. Above the basket, there are two burners used to release air into the envelope to make it rise to the sky.

With regard to how the balloon operates, the mixture of propane and the air produces flame to fill the balloon with the hot air via the burners, at which point the hot air inside is lighter than the cold air outside and the whole structure floats upwards. In order to descend, the valve at the top is left open so that the hot air can escape at a controlled rate.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49545454545 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4327101168 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504545454545 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5901929552 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172598238262 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773654036166 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575280247848 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123669265561 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450356797448 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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