The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.
The diagram represents the process of ketchup productions.
Overall, there are fifteen stages before it is ready to be served at a table. It begins with picking up tomatoes and ending with the delivery.
To begin with, a picker is picking tomatoes and put them in a basket. After that, the picker is grading tomatoes by its conditions before it sends to the factory for ketchup. At a factory, tomatoes are peeled off the skin and removal of unnecessary parts such as stalk and seeds. After collected in a container, those cleaned tomatoes are crushed and mixed with sugar, vinegar and salt. This mixture is then boiled and cooling down for two hours before it poured into a ketchup bottle. Then these ketchup bottles are passed through labelling and quality control to be packed and sent off to the supermarket before it is ready to be served at the table with fries and hamburgers.
- Some people believe that government should spend money on new building rather than renovating existing building.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 61
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. 61
- Define the consumer behaviour and discuss it. 73
- The pie chart below shows the methods of booked for English courses by international students in three different countries in 2009 and in 2010. 64
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'then', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236686390533 0.268076937826 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.195266272189 0.116061578633 168% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0473372781065 0.0759168565197 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0177514792899 0.0366838410393 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0414201183432 0.0131127313244 316% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14201183432 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0828402366864 0.0379272487307 218% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.46138160244 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355029585799 0.0210936926555 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0177514792899 0.00175180941692 1013% => OK
Determiners: 0.10650887574 0.0948980150116 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 886.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75324675325 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383116883117 0.337110787985 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25974025974 0.247514529752 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116883116883 0.171178102325 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0649350649351 0.112407865282 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46138160244 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 50.7018824854 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1111111111 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8409227999 42.9750493124 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 135.714022679 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 43.0851370851 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.81395348837 2.94281807926 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152396107204 0.418131533498 36% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120637008234 0.181151798455 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0845524291014 0.0850326197045 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581271552826 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173342523034 0.157042692854 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842525395952 0.228904883108 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621242629026 0.108899403657 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256146355547 0.367819155151 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.189204462091 0.0812612215331 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13228538254 0.316326947829 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522361533843 0.0921553760075 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.