The pie chart below the main reason why agriculture land become less productive.the table shows how causes affected three region of the world during the 1990
The given circular chart depict the information less production by agriculture into four reason. whereas ,the given tabular chart land production in three reason in preventing.
To begin with,land degradation of over cultivation due to 28% however,through over grazing 35% to land degradation.after that deforestation has 30% of region furthermore,others have 7% cause of land degradation respectively they have been 28,35,30,7 into preventing.
Secondly,into flow diagram due to north America,oceania was deforestation 0.2,3.3,1.5, into north American while Oceania were 1.7,0,11.3. furthermore these both country has total degradation 5%,13% respectively.
Overall,it is the evident of explore have been more degradation than others.whereas either over grazing highest in oceania or over cultivation into Europe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 112.0 196.424390244 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30357142857 4.92477711251 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2531531234 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78082568458 2.65546596893 142% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.10962844 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.23603664747 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114296514442 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784509539606 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694816396569 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687789685398 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792480290063 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.56 11.4140731707 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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