The given pie chart depicts the information about consumption of energy in typical Australian household and table provides the information about electricity consumed by the number of people in a house.
A closer look at illustration reveals that, highest amount of energy is consumed for heating and cooling which is 38%. Along with this, least consumption of electricity is for Stand by power. Electricity consumed for water heating is 25%. Moreover, similar proportion of electricity is used for lighting and fridges which attributes to 7% and 16% of energy consumed for other appliances.
It is evident from table 1 person used 5,000-6,500 kWh per year. Further, 2 and 3 person in the house used 6,000-8,500 and 7,500-10,000 kWh electricity per year respectively. Lastly, 6 and more person in the house used maximum electricity per year which is 12,000-16,000 kWh.
Overall, maximum energy consumed on heating and cooling and minimum used for stand by power. Number of people above 6 consumed highest electricity per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...closer look at illustration reveals that, highest amount of energy is consumed for heatin...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...nd cooling which is 38%. Along with this, least consumption of electricity is for Stand...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...00-6,500 kWh per year. Further, 2 and 3 person in the house used 6,000-8,500 and 7,500...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...r year respectively. Lastly, 6 and more person in the house used maximum electricity p...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the highest'.
Suggestion: consumed the highest
...tand by power. Number of people above 6 consumed highest electricity per year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28658536585 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00175315619 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518292682927 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4074704384 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151054783291 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689834330698 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671003706365 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111851235391 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072425853801 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.