The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.
The given pie chart and table respectively highlight the proportion of people with different nationalities residing in Australia in terms of their country of origin and their distribution in cities and rural areas.
Looking from an overall perspective, the majority of citizens living in Australia is indigenous. Regardless of their country of birth, the population of Australia distributed mostly in metropolises
As illustrated in the pie chart, three-quarters of people living in Australia is the locals, which is nearly 7 times greater when compared to citizens from the UK. As for people migrating from New Zealand, China and Netherland to Australia, they constitute merely 3%, 2% and 1% of the total population of Australia, accordingly. Ultimately, the other ethnic groups made up nearly one-fourth of Australia's population
Concerning the distribution of people, most of them living in cities. However, although made up merely 2% of the population, up to 99% of Chinese Australian are living in the urban regions throughout Australia. On the contrary, even though they took the largest share of the population, only 83% of people living in cities were native Australia. Meanwhile, approximately 9 out of 10 people from the Netherlands and the UK is living in cities. As for New Zealand, 80% of New Zealand-borns Australia are urban dwellers.
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- The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive Australia. Meanwhile, approximately 9 out of 10 people from the Netherlands ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, look, well, while, as for, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20405251559 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6543553546 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336390939881 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136765339038 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672107607045 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201976203942 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00912961110723 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.